For my final draft, I did some major revisions. I formed my introduction and conclusion, as well as structured my points better. I also worked on some grammar mistakes I had made in my first draft. Overall, I think I revised my analysis to be more thorough and organized.
Final Draft
Part of this class is learning to write in our disciplines. Being an education major, I found it appropriate to evaluate the Wall Street Journal by analyzing articles the WSJ has published on education. Mostly, I found economic incentive in the articles; below is my first draft detailing what I found.