For my final draft, I made sure to keep the progress I had made with making my piece more structured. I also used suggestions from my professor to make the quality of my writing professional. Looking at the final draft as compared to the first draft, I am amazed to see how far it has come!
Final Draft
For my next draft, I took into consideration the comments of my classmates. I created more of a structure for my self-analysis, as well as fixed some grammar mistakes in my piece. The piece was starting to come along really well!
Peer Draft
When I write freely, I tend to do so in a stream-of-consciousness way. I definitely started out like that in my first draft. I think that this mechanism helps me to get all of my thoughts down on paper; instead of worrying about grammar, I can worry about whether I am accurately communicating my ideas.